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jfreak
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Yuma, AZ, USA


0 posted 06-26-99 07:11 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jfreak

Have you ever walked where angels tread?
have you ever heard what an angel's said?
Have you ever seen an angel bled?
Have you ever touched an angel's head?
Have you ever seen an angel's wings?
Have you ever heard an angel sing?
Have you ever saw an angel leave?
Have you ever known an angel to disbelieve?

Have you ever seen a demon's brow?
Have you ever heard a demon scowl?
Have you ever asked a demon how?
Have you ever told a demon "NOW!!"?
Have you ever seen a demon fall?
Have you ever heard a demon call?
Have you ever seen a demon crawl?
Have you ever heard of a demon nailed to a wall?

Have you ever sat upon a fence?
Have you ever pondered recompence?
Have you ever been a misfit?
Have you ever felt like counterfeit?
Have you ever been stuck in a phone booth?
Have you ever squandered away your youth?
Have you ever felt like you would always lose?
Have you ever just looked into the eyes of truth?
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Alysia
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american falls, idaho usa


1 posted 06-26-99 08:44 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

my mind races at all of the questions that i so closely relate to. fabulous...enough said.

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~ Alysia*
Craig
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2 posted 06-26-99 08:57 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

Amazing Ö..I was impressed when I read it, each line forced me to read the next lines faster and faster I donít know if this was your intention (I hope it was) but it works beautifully.
jfreak
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3 posted 06-28-99 02:02 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

hey Craig,

thanx for your comment. I didn't think anyone would be able to get this poem or understand. Yet, you got it. Nice to know when you go out on a limb with a piece of work that someone appreciates it.

Jfreak
Augchic711
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O'Fallon, IL, USA


4 posted 06-28-99 02:36 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

ONE WORD FOR U JFREAK! WOW WOW WOW WOW I have never read a poem with such a deep meaning, It really made me think thank you for posting it!

*******Augchic711*******

jfreak
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5 posted 06-28-99 02:31 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

your so very welcome Augchic. Thank you for reading and posting.

Jfreak
 
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