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Alysia
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since 06-26-99
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american falls, idaho usa


0 posted 06-26-99 07:05 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

*I seek his love yet he knows it not.  Am I so confusing that I lead him further away from the fruit that holds my nectar?  Wishes, dreams, all fall upon the night as I lie naked to the sound of earthly beings.  Hold steady, speak not--for words are nonexistant in this land of complete companionship.  His eyes call to me as I am swept away by his heart.  Bury me in this thicket of uncontrollable feeling.  Forever will my heart beat and no more will it long to love you.*

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~ Alysia*
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jfreak
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1 posted 06-26-99 07:13 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

OUTSTANDING use of imagery!!!! I especially like the line of "bury me in this thicket of uncontrollable feeling".

That is a great line. Keep up the great work.

Jfreak
Alysia
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2 posted 06-29-99 02:50 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

Thanks jfreak. This poem was hard for me to write as I thought about all I wanted from the person I love and all I would have to give in return. It speaks from a heart broken one to many times.

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~ Alysia*
Newguy
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3 posted 06-29-99 03:56 PM       View Profile for Newguy   Email Newguy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Newguy

I agree...there is GREAT imagery here!!!
This poem also reminds me of my lost love...I SHOULD hate you for it...but I don't
Keep em coming!
Newguy
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4 posted 06-29-99 03:56 PM       View Profile for Newguy   Email Newguy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Newguy

I agree...there is GREAT imagery here!!!
This poem also reminds me of my lost love...I SHOULD hate you for it...but I don't
Keep em coming!
WhenDovesCry
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5 posted 06-29-99 08:37 PM       View Profile for WhenDovesCry   Email WhenDovesCry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhenDovesCry

absolutely beautiful...every line...i especially love "his eyes call to me as i am swept away by his heart"...
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