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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
The light eternal, The everlasting day, Give your heart to me, And I will show you the way. Through the stars I'll lead you, Through the higher heavens and beyond. I'm the only one who can take you, Into the timeless arms of Forever's dawn. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Welcome to the forums! This is a very concise, and nicely written piece. It makes me feel like I"m in church... it's a good feeling, really! I'd like to hear this put to music. Thanks for posting  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Verve, this is very nicely done... I absolutely love poetry that imparts a positive message.... and yours surely does..  ------------------ Nan's Morsels netpoets.net/nan/index.html |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
beautiful!! ~m~  ------------------ www.auburn.edu/~fergum1 ~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~ |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
mmmmmmmmmmmmm... Very nice.  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I like this piece as well. I look forward to reading more of you. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ahhh....I love finding these treasures in the archives. Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a treasure indeed |
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