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Verve
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0 posted 06-26-99 09:43 AM       View Profile for Verve   Email Verve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Verve



The light eternal,
The everlasting day,
Give your heart to me,
And I will show you the way.

Through the stars I'll lead you,
Through the higher heavens and beyond.
I'm the only one who can take you,
Into the timeless arms of Forever's dawn.
© Copyright 1999 Regina Ng C. L. - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 06-26-99 09:59 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Welcome to the forums!

This is a very concise, and nicely written piece. It makes me feel like I"m in church... it's a good feeling, really! I'd like to hear this put to music.

Thanks for posting
Nan
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2 posted 06-26-99 03:29 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Verve, this is very nicely done...
I absolutely love poetry that imparts a positive message.... and yours surely does..


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Moonlight
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3 posted 06-26-99 05:24 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

beautiful!!

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Sally S.
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4 posted 06-26-99 06:30 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

mmmmmmmmmmmmm...
Very nice.
DreamEvil
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5 posted 06-27-99 04:55 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I like this piece as well. I look forward to reading more of you.
Justbleu
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6 posted 04-13-2003 11:41 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Ahhh....I love finding these treasures in the archives.  Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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a treasure indeed
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