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sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-06-25 02:39 PM


Before there was you I prided myself
On my indestructable iron will
I could set my emotions on a shelf
Just set them aside and be still

Then your sparkling eyes of purest green
Captured and consumed my soul
The most mesmerizing I have seen
One look and I lose all control

The love and the passion you stir in me
Is more intense than any I've felt
I want this to last eternally
One look from those eyes and I melt

I feel your hands run down my sides
Igniting a passionate fire
Out of control I go with the tides
Indescribable burning desire

Overwhelmed by how deeply I feel
How strongly I've bonded to you
before you would I gladly kneel
And vow my whole life to be true

So if you wonder, my love goddess
About crazy things I may say or do
It is all because, I must confess
I am so intoxicated by you

(For Kari, who made me feel again...
thank you my love)


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Steven Seaman
A burden shared is a burden lightened
A life shared is a life enriched


© Copyright 1999 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Wintersurfer
Junior Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 16

1 posted 1999-06-25 09:43 PM


Kari has certainly inspired a wonderful work here.....beautiful! I am sure she, as well as all that read this piece, appreciate your finely crafted words...I know I do!
JANNA
Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 51
arlington, tx usa
2 posted 1999-06-25 09:54 PM


Wow, Kari is a lucky girl, hopefully you have shared this with her!!
seaslady
Junior Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 43

3 posted 1999-08-08 12:52 PM


Kari was a lucky girl, but things can change so quickly. Now someone else is the lucky one.
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