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I Would Kiss You

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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 06-25-99 02:06 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

I would kiss you as the sun does the morning sky.
At first, so gently as give rise to a soft golw,
Only to awaken your passion with a blazing kiss
And with incrasing heat across your body, flow.

Then drawing forth the fullness of your desire,
Burning life into what lies below,
There I'd light your heart with love's great fire.
If I would kiss you, I would kiss you so.
© Copyright 1999 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
invertigo18
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1 posted 06-25-99 02:28 PM       View Profile for invertigo18   Email invertigo18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for invertigo18

I liked this one alot. You take the reader into the journey of the heart. Something alot of people have trouble doing. I hope to read more of your work.

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Andrew Scott
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2 posted 06-25-99 04:57 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

invertigo18 - Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. I'll seek to do the same.

Andrew
Poet deVine
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3 posted 06-25-99 06:38 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely! You've got a good style of writing. I intend to read some more of your work.
Sally S.
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4 posted 06-25-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

........
hmmmmm? Oh, yes...um. A kiss? Oh, yes.
Well, we all enjoy those tender, passionate kisses. Very nice.
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 07-27-99 09:47 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

He he he - my hard drive's smokin'....have you tried writing any erotic poetry? You'd be good I think...you're good at painting your ideas of even the smallest of moments...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

blueloon
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6 posted 07-27-99 09:55 AM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I'm not really sure what to say except...I WANT A KISS LIKE THAT NOW, NOW, NOW! Please excuse my temper tantrum....that was really good!
blueloon
jfreak
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7 posted 08-01-99 12:07 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

great poem. awesome use of imagery.

jfreak
Tinu
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8 posted 08-01-99 12:51 PM       View Profile for Tinu   Edit/Delete Message      Click to visit Tinu's Home Page   View IP for Tinu

Ah, romance is in the biggest, little things. And there is so much romance in a kiss! Kisses like those make you fall in love, then keep you there....

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Ohme
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9 posted 08-01-99 01:43 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme



Now that's the way to start a morning, or conclude the day.

Lovely, inviting
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow.......would I to find someone that kissed like that, I think I might just be happy forever!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Areya
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Written with a true soul of a poet. Lovely.
redwriter1
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12 posted 08-02-99 07:21 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

Where does the line start??..

Save one of those for me please. yes yes yes
mmm.. "shivvveeerrrr"
Andrew Scott
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13 posted 08-02-99 12:17 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott


Imagine my surprise to find this one dug up from the heap of so much great poetry. My special thanks to Poet Femme Fatale for taking the effort to do so. And to all whom have responded a kiss of thanks as well (Guys - If you just want to take a handshake, that's fine too).
 
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