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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 1999-06-25 12:48 PM


Remembering Elisa
I look up to the sky
And see the stars have yet
To decide if I will die
Before the sun should set

I look up to your eyes
And see their steely gray
As the fog rolls slowly by
They steal my heart away

And now the sky is clear
I see the wondrous view
Just to have it all right here
The stars the sun and you

For my wife

© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-06-25 01:03 PM


now I know why the initials of wayoutwalt is WOW!
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 1999-06-25 01:07 PM


thanks balladeer.. so i could write one for my wife glad you liked it. Hey this poem was for my wife would you like to read what I wrote for her years before I met her? If so look deep into this forum for a poem called Heaven's Touch...thanky thanky
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
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3 posted 1999-07-20 12:21 PM


your wife is a lucky lady indeed "wayoutwaltz"

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...



Alwye
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4 posted 1999-07-20 01:38 AM


beautiful..your wife is a lucky woman.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


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DreamEvil
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5 posted 1999-07-20 01:54 AM


Darn, walt,you nailed this one too.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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~one voice~
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6 posted 1999-07-20 02:58 AM


Very beautiful walt...I'm sure that your wife knows she is a lucky woman!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."


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