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Joyfulltune
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0 posted 06-25-99 02:16 AM       View Profile for Joyfulltune   Email Joyfulltune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyfulltune

I need to know, why donít you call?
I need to know, do you care at all?
I need to know, are we just nothing?
I need to know, did we have something?

I know we only shared one night.
I know we both need someone right.
I know you have a sorrowed past.
I know that we can make this last.

I wish I could be with you.
I wish I knew just what to do.
I wish the world was ours tonight.
I wish for more than just one night.

I want you to know, Iíve known you before,
I want you to know Iíd like to know more.
I want you to know what happiness is
I want you to know with another kiss.

I love you.
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owen
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1 posted 06-25-99 02:25 AM       View Profile for owen   Email owen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit owen's Home Page   View IP for owen

im not sure what to call it either, but it sounds like sour love.
owen
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2 posted 06-25-99 02:26 AM       View Profile for owen   Email owen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit owen's Home Page   View IP for owen

oh, and I forgot to mention that it was really good and I liked it. sometimes I can be so rude
Joyfulltune
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3 posted 06-25-99 02:46 AM       View Profile for Joyfulltune   Email Joyfulltune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyfulltune

not rude at all. I've never written poetry before 2 nights ago. so any criticism is welcome. =0)
Genea
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4 posted 06-25-99 07:57 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

Joy,

Read your poem to yourself....what emotion does it remind you of? Give it that name.

[just a suggestion]

~Genea
Balladeer
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5 posted 06-25-99 12:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How about "know need"? Or "wishes, needs and wants"? Whatever you name it, I name it well-done!
Tequilia_Sunrise
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6 posted 07-04-2004 11:21 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

enjoyed this
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