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Jennifer
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0 posted 06-25-99 01:09 AM       View Profile for Jennifer   Email Jennifer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer

I wrote this poem a couple of years ago, hoping to find the perfect boyfriend who would fit the description. I have now and he is absolutely perfect in every way.

You complete me; you complete everything I am
You are my hero and my strength
You share my feelings and my dreams
You gave me the world so graciously
You helped me discover myself and all I can ever hope to be
You held my hand when I cried tears of sorrow
You rejoiced with me when I cried tears of joy
You let me discover how it feels to be loved
And to love someone until it hurts
You put me on a pedestal for all to see
You don't care to show others how you feel about me
As we walk through the darkness you held my hand
And led the way.
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
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1 posted 06-25-99 01:20 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

We definitely have our desires in common and I'm glad you found someone to complete all of these things in the poem it is great! Thank you for sharing it with me

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azblond
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2 posted 07-15-99 04:47 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I think this one hit the nail on the head. Complete you would be with someone such as this at your side!
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