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Sol a Terre

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wayoutwalt
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My soul is a twisted wreck
Eyes breathe hotly down her neck
Though I'll follow where she goes
Still inside me something grows
Her innocence feeds my hate
Evil thoughts help me to wait

I can see what she's headed for
But I will do nothing more
If she knew what would she say
As if I could turn away
But soon she will find her fate
Evil thoughts help me to wait

Then she turns and looks at me
And we both fall into the sea
All I've held comes crashing down
The fire dwindles as I drown
Though it seems that it's too late
Evil thoughts can always wait

© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Genea
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1 posted 06-25-99 07:46 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

wayoutwalt,

this is spooky! Wouldnt want to read this aloud in a thunderstorm! :-)

~Genea
Nan
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So, try as we might - we're powerless over our destinies, eh? Nice poem, wayout...

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