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Nicole
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0 posted 06-24-99 05:05 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

Look deep into my eyes,
what do you see?
Sadness, lonliness...
yes.
A scared little girl in an
uncertain world.
Yet these eyes have seen pain
and loss and love.
They are not pure and good,
yet long for that
which no one can give.
These eyes see hope.

Look deep into my eyes,
and you will see
a part of me
that is yet to be free.
I need to release
and let you inside.
To hold me until the end of time.

Look deep into my eyes,
what do you see?
Perhaps...one day
you will see
the look in your eyes
as you look at me.
© Copyright 1999 Nicole Adams - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-24-99 06:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very beautiful. It is simple and sincere in a low-key yet very powerful way. Very nice work.
Krystal
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I agree with Balladeer... very beautiful. I really liked the ending... nice job!

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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