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Summer Love

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Krystal
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0 posted 06-24-99 04:58 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Krystal

A saucer moon
That lay in the skies;
Black velvet
On a warm summer night.

Diamonds on the water,
Sand beneath your feet;
Child of a thousand fantasies,
Always dancing to a different beat.

A single red rose
Falls from your hand;
Its velvety petals
Scatter upon the sand;

And the waves wash over you,
Taking with them
The life I once knew,

Leaving nothing behind
But memories
Of a love that was true.


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Nicole
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1 posted 06-24-99 05:11 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

"And the waves wash over you"...I love it! I always enjoy reading your work, and looking forward to more.
Krystal
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2 posted 06-24-99 05:15 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

Thank you, Satiate! :-)

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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DreamEvil
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3 posted 06-25-99 05:33 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Impassioned piece, I love the scene it brings to mind. Quite a sharp turn to it.
Nan
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4 posted 06-25-99 08:28 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, indeed - Krystal
Krystal
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5 posted 06-25-99 12:37 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

Thanks, guys! Your comments mean a lot to me. :-)

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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6 posted 07-04-2004 11:23 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

very nice
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