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chris Junior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 29rowlett, texas, usa |
through the windows of time across the bridges of space over the emptiness of mind around the boundries of race under the vastness of soul below the fullness of heart rivers of truth flowing worlds apart seperated by lies joined by fear lives intertwined through falling tears madman lives freely insanity thrives justice is blinded while a mother cries child killing child no right or wrong teeth tearing flesh a bitter song black and white no color seen death runs rampant who planted the seed dying's become only escape no longer left to hands of fate youth wait in line for their turn to die going through motions not asking why... alone ------------------ does anybody know does anybody care what are the words we're attempting to share chris |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
Chris, this is one powerful piece of poetry. I wish none of what you said were true but unfortunantly "ALL" of it is. Well written! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This poem made me feel like I was tumbling into a dark hole! Great job! I really liked it. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Excellent, Chris! Really very fine work. |
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