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set me free

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chris
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since 06-23-99
Posts 33
rowlett, texas, usa


0 posted 06-24-99 12:38 PM       View Profile for chris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chris

A world passed before my eyes
can you tell me where i've been
Dreamed of life so many times
but i can't go home again

years fly by
feeling so much wasted time

Walked away from the memories
i was chasing my own dreams
Put my faith in a fairy tale
now my past can't be redeemed

years fly by
feeling so much wasted time
hear my cries

fly me away
won't you take me to a brighter day
come fly me away
don't let this pain grow here inside of me
set it free




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does anybody know
does anybody care
what are the words
we're attempting to share

chris

© Copyright 1999 chris - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


1 posted 06-24-99 12:49 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i like it yes the part about the fairy tale and not being able to make up for time wasted on a dream (like writing my poetry to make money hahahaa)
Krystal
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since 06-19-99
Posts 145
Shelton,WA USA


2 posted 06-24-99 04:10 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

I liked it... it really makes you think about your own life, and how you've spent the time you've been given. Very good!

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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fjones
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since 06-07-99
Posts 101
MS


3 posted 06-24-99 04:19 PM       View Profile for fjones   Email fjones   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fjones

Yes life is short-- It's a Vopor
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