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0 posted 06-24-99 11:41 AM       View Profile for evolution   Email evolution   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for evolution

anger, rage, frustration all bestowed upon me at once
love, the klutz emotion, the catalyst of it all
building up, pulling me, pushing me
these emotions can make me alive
they make me die
salvation can only come from apathy
apathy a place i can never achieve
furious wrath conceived from blind love
i am my own enemy
my love my weapon
i defeat myself with it
i conceal the wounds with bandages
never seen but never healed
the pain is constant, never fleeting
i become one with it, it is part of me
it engulfs me until it is me
all of me
i surrender
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Very moving...
I especially like the line "salvation can only come from apathy". It is definately a salvation I have yet to achieve. Well done!
 
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