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Sic
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since 06-21-99
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brisbane,qld,australia


0 posted 06-24-99 03:26 AM       View Profile for Sic   Email Sic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sic

tripping on the sunshine
blinded by the light
and i cannot block the vision
no matter how hard i fight
it seeps into my head
my judgment is so phased
im left to stumble round
confused and completley dazed
but it is my own doing
i chose to eat the paper
im a recreation user
not a drug taker
and i keep telling this
to my tortured soul
as the drugs keep coming
my life burns out of control
till one day, the flame dies down
my life is a gutted shell
yes my heart still beats
but im already in hell
so i end it all
finish what i started
on another plane, a different existance
and my family's broken hearted.
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dreamy_eyes
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since 06-17-2000
Posts 82


1 posted 07-08-2000 05:41 AM       View Profile for dreamy_eyes   Email dreamy_eyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dreamy_eyes

WOW!  What a emotional poem.  I write a lot of drug poems.  If you want to read any of them use the search function in the open poetry 8# and just type in drugs and you will find them there.  Make sure you only search the open poetry 8# because you will find hundreds of other drugs poems.  You express you feelings well and open your heart.  You have delt with drugs the hard way and even when you have stoped taking drugs the temptation never goes away.  Good luck and don't let drugs beat you!  

Love Deb
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2 posted 02-11-2002 04:45 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

emotional write indeed! Im sorry that I'ts taken me 3 years to reply but I only became a member 5 months ago lol
SilentTears
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Lost and Broken


3 posted 03-19-2003 04:16 PM       View Profile for SilentTears   Email SilentTears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SilentTears

Very nice job! You had a good usage of emotional words. I liked it a lot!
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