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Open Poetry #1

love

evolution
Junior Member

since 1999-06-24

Posts 22
ma, usa

0 posted 1999-06-24 01:14 AM

in that instant i found love
the wayward meeting of our hands
the coldness of your skin melting into the warmth of mine
all my desires culminating in the scent of your hair
i saw my reason in your eyes
oh how i never wanted anymore than this
anymore than you
your skin tasted like love
as it gently brushed across my skin
i found tranquility in your kiss
as i fell into you, i fell into greatness
for that moment i was more than i could ever be
in that instant i found love
in that instant i found you

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 1999-06-24 10:45 AM

Beautiful....wonderfully written!

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

2 posted 1999-06-24 04:18 PM

I agree with Satiate... beautiful! I really liked this one a lot.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

evolution
Junior Member

since 1999-06-24

Posts 22
ma, usa

3 posted 1999-11-25 02:32 AM

i just looked at this for the first time in 6 months. its funny how thoughts change

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-11 06:04 PM

aww well its been 3 yrs now, i hope u are still in love lol.

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