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Emotion Potion

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invertigo18
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since 06-14-99
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0 posted 06-23-99 10:57 PM       View Profile for invertigo18   Email invertigo18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for invertigo18

And only angels see
What the mind bereaves.
Taken on up
The pain floats in the sky.
Fallen to the ground.
A tear falls from your eye.

Balanced is what we are.
Kept from floating away.
By the gravity of our emotions
Mixed inside as secret potions.
On raven's wings we carry them wary
That sometimes they may get scary.

Wisdom is our only ally.
Knowledge is our only insight.
We focus on these to get through the day.
Not listening to what our emotions say.

Consistently angry.
Persistently loved.
Our conscience is weak.
And all of the above.



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Luke Cakalic
© Copyright 1999 invertigo18 - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
Posts 887
Ohio


1 posted 06-23-99 11:15 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

A wonderful play of words. I felt the poem moved well..(is that what they call well metered?) Anyway, thank you for sharing this. Nice work.
Joyfulltune
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2 posted 06-24-99 12:02 AM       View Profile for Joyfulltune   Email Joyfulltune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyfulltune

good job....i like your style.
 
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