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The Hate Within

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invertigo18
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since 06-14-99
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0 posted 06-23-99 10:27 PM       View Profile for invertigo18   Email invertigo18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for invertigo18

Hate, hate your friends
Pretend to love them
Pretend you care.
Pretend, when there's nothing there.

Thorn in my side
Will never subside
The hate within
For all the sin

A coward
A hero
A liar
A zero.

What will come of this?
When will it end?
Wading in your piss
Fake and pretend.

The ocean of pain
will consume you in vain.
The ocean of pain
will make you insane.

Your way is wrong.
My way is strong.
For I am a hero.
And you're nothing
but a zero.

Remember this
And the hate within.
Hate yourself
Because you deserve it.


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Luke Cakalic
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Genea
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1 posted 06-23-99 10:33 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

invertigo,

Not sure i understand this, but there is a lot of emotion in your writing.

~Genea
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Luke, I don't think you like that person very much.......and I agree. Strong poem.
invertigo18
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3 posted 06-23-99 10:42 PM       View Profile for invertigo18   Email invertigo18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for invertigo18

Thankyou. This poem is about a friend of mine that's no longer my friend...for certain reasons. And yes, I try to throw all of myself into what I write. Because if I didn't, then it wouldn't be truly sincere.
Once again thankyou, and have a great day!

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Luke Cakalic
 
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