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All righty my poetic friends - Listen up!!

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elvira
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25 posted 07-14-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i tend to reply much more than i post...my poetry a bit rusty, rhyming at most...back to the top with advice so sound...let's give it one more go-around

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My One and Only ... Childhood Memories ... your countenance ... hoarse whispers ... serving wench ... stolen hours ... devotion ... Master

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


26 posted 07-14-99 05:26 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Just when I was beginning to whine
that no one was reading poetry of mine
all those eggs out there unread
then back to the top and this message says

"read the ones left undone!"
or words to that effect
and I thought heck
I've been doing my part, hon!

So Nan, back to the top once again
so all the new kids can see where we've been
to niggle their brain with thoughts anew
and to comment and critique, they ought to do.

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ

Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-14-99).]
elvira
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27 posted 07-14-99 06:59 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

stooping, bending, lifting...up you go!
elvira
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28 posted 07-14-99 11:20 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

azblond
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The Steamy Desert


29 posted 07-15-99 01:46 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Please forgive me for posting too much
I really try to keep others in touch
You see, I can't sleep late at night
And here I've found a place to write

I try to reply to as many as I post
And really its to the credit of our host
who created a site for which I'm addicted
You see I've really become quite afflicted!

But I promise to do whatever I can
To keep my post down, my reply's up again
And bring this post back to the top of the list
To be read by those who it may have missed!

(Am I forgiven??)(If I say Please??!!)

elvira
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30 posted 07-15-99 04:09 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

this should always be on top me thinks
~one voice~
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31 posted 07-15-99 04:29 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I agree with every one of you!
Read the poems and tell the truth!
The praise you get is so worthwhile!
It will surely make you smile!
So after reading one or two,
let the author hear from you!
And in return the author might
read your work and give insight!
Nan knows what she's talkin' 'bout!
Respond, she says! There's not a doubt!
Just give a little of your time,
and you'll get praised for every rhyme!

Okay?

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

Masked Intruder
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32 posted 07-15-99 12:13 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

To rhyme
Or not to rhyme?
That is the question
Or not?
NOT!


I was really gonna try,
Really...
Honestly...
I'm not lying...
Or not?

actually...*grins*, I was...
but I gave up when I looked at the HTML stuff...hehehehe!


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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?
tori
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33 posted 07-15-99 12:58 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

To each and every Poet here
And the Esteemed Master Balladeer
I bid Salutations to all of you,

Nan your words are spoken true
I wish every one would read, and do

Maybe if upon the form,
we fill out to join the forum
If the words were written there

All would start with a grand post
By replying to our Gracious host
A challenge, some may say
But I think it might work out this way
Then this message would stay on top

And not one post would sit alone
And feel that they knocked,
when no one was home

If I sit and read a spell
I'll do my part and reply as well

Oh yes, Nan these words are right
If you post you must reply

Don't worry about the numbers game
Every pome in whom evers name
Is from a heart just the same
elvira
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34 posted 07-15-99 05:50 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

with a skip and a hop...back to the top

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Tribute to M.J. ... My One and Only ... Childhood Memories ... your countenance ... hoarse whispers ... serving wench ... stolen hours ... devotion ... Master

Sundance
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35 posted 07-15-99 05:57 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

What wuz that about?

elvira
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36 posted 07-15-99 09:24 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

this should be the first thing any newbie reads
Alwye
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In the space between moments


37 posted 07-15-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I think some of us need to take a look at this again...especially those who post and do not respond in the teen forum..

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*

Genea
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38 posted 07-15-99 10:51 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea



thanks for the hint on the graphics, Nan.....hope this works!
Genea
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39 posted 07-15-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

it did work!!
GOTCHA!!!
[This message has been edited by Genea (edited 07-15-99).]

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-17-99).]
elvira
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40 posted 07-16-99 02:03 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

another lift to the top
elvira
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41 posted 07-16-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

elvira
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42 posted 07-17-99 04:48 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i'm starting to feel like...what's that greek mythical figure, the one rolling the boulder up the hill?
elvira
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43 posted 07-17-99 05:15 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

next person to read this, please lend a hand and bring it back to the top
tulip
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44 posted 07-17-99 05:33 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

O.K. I've finally made it through,
reading the responses of me and you.
I'll post a reply and send it up,
Replying more often, now matter how tough!
elvira
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45 posted 07-17-99 06:42 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

tulip.....i'm sure you'll blossom on this site
elvira
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46 posted 07-18-99 05:22 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

Saxoness
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47 posted 07-18-99 06:53 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

well............I feel lost......but it's good advice. so far, I've been messaging alot. Everyone, I'm new......but please read my night magic, my masterpiece, and tell me what you think.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot
elvira
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48 posted 07-18-99 07:02 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

some things i have learned since "joining": the more you respond the more replies you get, better to post only one poem a day
~one voice~
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49 posted 07-18-99 08:00 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Alright, I'll lend a helping hand...
This one stays on top! ~one voice~
 
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