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A Little Thing

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fjones
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0 posted 06-23-99 06:47 PM       View Profile for fjones   Email fjones   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fjones

A thong is
But(t)
A little thing
Held
By a string
And
Perhaps a
(K)not
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Genea
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1 posted 06-23-99 10:37 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

very funny! lol

Ron
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2 posted 06-24-99 12:18 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

Short is often good, as I said before. Short and hilarious is even better!


Norma's Jeans



Threads worn thin
To faded whispers,
A dream of what there lie.

Torn and tattered,
Her flesh, white clouds
Peeking from denim sky.

So tight
She couldn't breath.
Nor could I.



elvira
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3 posted 07-21-99 05:47 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

thanks for the chuckle

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

INclan
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4 posted 07-21-99 06:35 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Nicely done. I like a good thong. You could drop the last 'a' and still hold the pun.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very funny piece with a nice flow
 
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