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fjones
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since 1999-06-07
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0 posted 1999-06-23 06:47 PM


A thong is
But(t)
A little thing
Held
By a string
And
Perhaps a
(K)not

© Copyright 1999 fjones - All Rights Reserved
Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA
1 posted 1999-06-23 10:37 PM


very funny! lol


Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669
Michigan, US
2 posted 1999-06-24 12:18 PM


Short is often good, as I said before. Short and hilarious is even better!


Norma's Jeans



Threads worn thin
To faded whispers,
A dream of what there lie.

Torn and tattered,
Her flesh, white clouds
Peeking from denim sky.

So tight
She couldn't breath.
Nor could I.




elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-07-21 05:47 AM


thanks for the chuckle

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~


INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
4 posted 1999-07-21 06:35 AM


Nicely done. I like a good thong. You could drop the last 'a' and still hold the pun.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-07-21 10:15 AM


Very funny piece with a nice flow
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