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When I Think About You

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wayoutwalt
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When I Think About You

I think of sunny days
Running through the park
And those lusty displays
Lying in the dark

Of a candlelit night
A sudden gust of wind
You say it's allright
It dosen't have to end

When the only light remains
Cut deeply into your eyes
Neither one of us complains
Hearing other lovers cry
© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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I like what you've left to the imagination and the picture it creates, the only thing more powerful than this poems subject is the actual security you find in holding your "greatest love" and forgetting all your problems

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you softie
Justbleu
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Nice to be in the archives reading little ol treasures such as this!!!!  

Take Care!!!!!
Bridgette
 
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