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Open Poetry #1

When I Think About You

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 1999-06-23 11:21 AM

When I Think About You

I think of sunny days
Running through the park
And those lusty displays
Lying in the dark

Of a candlelit night
A sudden gust of wind
You say it's allright
It dosen't have to end

When the only light remains
Cut deeply into your eyes
Neither one of us complains
Hearing other lovers cry

#5 PS
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since 1999-06-21

Posts 19
Ogden, Utah, USA

1 posted 1999-06-23 12:48 PM

I like what you've left to the imagination and the picture it creates, the only thing more powerful than this poems subject is the actual security you find in holding your "greatest love" and forgetting all your problems

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#5 Poetic Society

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-04-23 03:22 AM

you softie

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2005-10-29 01:11 AM

Nice to be in the archives reading little ol treasures such as this!!!!

Take Care!!!!!
Bridgette

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