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Crystal Wave

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wayoutwalt
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Me on the mountain side
My heart will not behave
For she on the ocean tide
Riding a crystal wave

I watch her from above
Her eyes reveal the sea
I cant help but shout my love
The waves crash silently

I run down to the shore
Never to think that when
She never knew me before
She’d want to know me then

The waves crash out her name
The ocean is at its worst
I follow from where she came
But never quench my thirst
© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
fjones
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Could this have been Ariel the Mermaid?
DreamEvil
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Quite nicely done! A pleasure to read.
Christina Myers
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I love the water theme that runs through your poems, walt... I've always been fascinated by the ocean...streams...creeks..
baths.. lol

something terribly poetic about the roar of the waves...you do a very good job of capturing that.

-C
 
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