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Dear Mom,

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garret
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since 06-20-99
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Harrisville, N.H 03450


0 posted 06-22-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for garret   Email garret   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for garret

I can see you there
with miles of concrete
and traffic and people below.
The day is warm spring
and wind moves your hair
gently around.
The irony of nobody there
to catch a glimpse of the sky
the beautiful night sky,
is too much.
That old sun has etched its last line
for the last time
but you would hate for it
to go away.
Even in those final minutes
when the milky moon
becomes your eyes
you look up and wonder
what would be if you could
speak to the world
one last time.
Before the milky moon
became your eyes.

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Krystal
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since 06-19-99
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1 posted 06-23-99 04:06 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

This is sad, touching... I liked it.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")
 
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