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utopianangel
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I am mad.
Furious and crazy
Take my life
Relieve me kill me
No thought triggers happiness
Dead lost
I am nothing.
Trapped in mind
Thirsty in heart
Love fails
Always it disappears
Seeking love
Impossible love
Illusion delusion
Hallucination of love
I am mad.

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Rachel
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Christina Myers
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I like the way this poem starts and ends on the same note.. the reader brought to more of an understanding by the end.
It's a cynical piece, true.. but definitely full of things I've thought of myself.

-C
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