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Open Poetry #1

I am special

fjones
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 98
MS

0 posted 1999-06-22 06:29 PM

I am special--
With a place my own,
In Pa Paw’s arms--
The safest place I have known.

Only prefect child born.
I have no flaws.
I am sure of it;
Because I am Pa Paw’s

Anyone who don’t believe.
Just listen to Pa Paw’s daughter
While she tries to defend
To punish is what she ought’er.

Ron

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-05-19

Posts 8669
Michigan, US

1 posted 1999-06-22 09:04 PM

You are, indeed. And as usual, your wisdom has subtly reinforced a Universal Truth. If only all children could know unconditional love, there would be no self-esteem problems and the world could be a much more beautiful place. I think I have known very few poets who could say so much with so few words. You should post some of your really short ones, so everyone could see what I mean.

Ron

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-06-22 09:35 PM

Wonderful, and beautifully written...

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