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sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15
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Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-06-22 05:15 PM


My house isn't home without you
Just a place where I lay my head
Though filled with all my possessions
The atmosphere within it is dead

My days are so lonely without you
And everything seems out of place
My mirror is worthless without you
It should be reflecting your face

My meals are tasteless without you
Your presence the spice that I lack
I need to hold and to kiss you
And to feel you kissing me back

My bed is so empty without you
There's no love and no warmth in the night
I feel that you belong here beside me
And I know that this feeling is right

My life's incomplete without you
Standing each day by my side
I can't truly live 'til I'm with you
'Til the day that you are my bride

© Copyright 1999 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-06-22 08:29 PM


Lovely! Every word was perfection!


seaslady
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 43

2 posted 1999-08-07 02:10 PM


these words.... I wish so much they were for real...
seaslady
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since 1999-06-25
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3 posted 1999-08-07 02:17 PM


The one you share your home with... (Paula) is indeed the lucky one...
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