Ogden, Utah, USA
This is one of the more unique poems that i've read in a while. A different way of showing that your guard was let down, which isn't always a bad thing. I've never read a more true verse than the following: "opportunities lost
just out of grasp it hurts to reach for it
but still, you fight and grab at the air,
only to come back
slapped in the face for trying"
Sometimes our efforts are given in vain yet we still have that one shred of hope that things will work out...I guess thats what we call faith
#5 Poetic Society