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ac
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since 1999-06-17
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Cayey, PR - USA

0 posted 1999-06-21 08:38 PM


Can I count on you,
When I'm feeling blue?
When I'm so depressed,
by what I've been through...

Can I look in your eyes
and find what I need...
The compassion, the interest,
Perhaps your need of me...

Is it worth my time,
to have faith, to have trust,
To assume that through time,
it will be more than lust...

Can I believe in your words,
all those things that you say?
Or will I only regret this,
on the next day...

[This message has been edited by ac (edited 06-21-99).]

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Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-06-21 08:40 PM


Boy, is that a question we've all asked at one time or another! Problem is, the answer is always yes, whether it's true or not. Well written!
ac
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since 1999-06-17
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Cayey, PR - USA
2 posted 1999-06-21 09:08 PM


thanks much Balladeer...coming from you i'm touched, flattered and ultimately complimented...thanks for taking the time to read and respond...
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