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Didn't I

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Krystal
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since 06-19-99
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Shelton,WA USA


0 posted 06-21-99 02:15 AM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Krystal

Didn't I
Shower you with affection?
Didn't I
Offer every sweet confection?

Didn't I
Write you pretty love songs?
So tell me please...
Where did I go wrong?

Didn't I
Soothe away your pain?
Didn't I
Shelter you from the rain?

Didn't I
Declare my love every day?
So tell me please...
Why did you go away?

Didn't I
Tread softly in your dreams?
Didn't I
Mend our love at the seams?

Didn't I
Write you pretty love songs?
So tell me please...
Where did I go wrong?

Now I think I see,
The truth in front of me;
I loved you
More than you loved me...

Didn't I?


To Chris

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1 posted 06-21-99 04:01 PM       View Profile for #5 PS   Email #5 PS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for #5 PS

The more I read your poems the more I see the pain you are/were in, I like this one alot (along with all of your other ones)especially the last verse. I like repetitive poems that draw you into a daze and then smack you in the face at the end, great work!

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Krystal
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Shelton,WA USA


2 posted 06-21-99 06:11 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

#5...Thank you for your insight, and for reading and responding. It means a lot, and your comments are very much appreciated!

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