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Mid-night miseries

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milt
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since 06-19-99
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whitley city ky usa


0 posted 06-20-99 10:30 PM       View Profile for milt   Email milt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for milt

Mid-night miseries
call to me
showing me things
I dare not see
Mid-night miseries
whispering in my mind
of the things
I've left behind
echoed voices in my head
telling me things
I fear and dread
I listen and listen
trying my best to escape
this twisted torment
yet I think I would miss it
if it were gone
for that would leave me
all alone....
© Copyright 1999 milt - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
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1 posted 06-20-99 11:29 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I like the concept of the poem. I read it a couple times through...it seems....well, am I missing the format(style)? I felt like the beginning flowed well then got lost. This could be a powerful poem.

Remember, I'm not an expert here. Just giving you my opinion.
milt
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since 06-19-99
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whitley city ky usa


2 posted 06-21-99 11:59 AM       View Profile for milt   Email milt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for milt

to sally
thanks for your opinion, and I promise when read in the right tones and speed it continues to flow, i appreciate the reply
ps. still learning this bbs don't know if I replied to you in the right procedure I just posted a reply myself, is that the way its done?

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