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Temptress
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0 posted 06-20-99 10:24 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Temptress

Press of the lips
Stop of the heart,
Fresh is the passion,
Sweet is the flavor.

Remember the gentleman.
Rush of the blood.
Warm is the memory.
Chilled is the collected plan.

Meeting of eyes
Collision of fates.
Dangerous is the love
Intriguing the mystery.

Brush of fingertips
Holding of hands.
Fulfilled is the destiny.
Desire the flame.
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-20-99 10:28 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is really good! I am impressed by your ability to do free verse, I'm so set in my ways with rhyme it's hard to break out. I like this a lot!
milt
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2 posted 06-21-99 12:46 PM       View Profile for milt   Email milt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for milt

passionate, well written. I like it alot
Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Very passionate, a wonderful job, I must say!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
amber
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4 posted 07-31-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

very lust filled and beautiful, great job.
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5 posted 07-31-99 08:07 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Not a wasted letter. Everything in the proper place and meaningful. Great job, Temptress.
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Very nicely done...alot said with very little words. The flow of this just moved along very nicely.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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Near golden sunsets


7 posted 01-24-2002 05:01 PM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Is this the first one? *grins*

Oh, to be three years younger.  LOL

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8 posted 02-11-2002 04:28 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

hey jen, this is neat! I like it!
I just ventured into open poetry 1 to see some of your old stuff. I like
RosePetal
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hey jen, this is neat! I like it!
I just ventured into open poetry 1 to see some of your old stuff. I like
Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you


10 posted 05-15-2002 02:49 AM       View Profile for Moonlight Romeo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonlight Romeo

You don't mind if I search around do you?

Is this really your first poem here??  You were good even then.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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