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milt
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 18
whitley city ky usa

0 posted 1999-06-20 06:56 PM


Can I shed a tear for you
if I think I know
what your going through
can I hold you close
whisper secrets only you and I know
I wish I could take all your pain
and throw it far from you
help you make it through each day
keeping all your demons away
oh to help
enlighten you to your true self
I know you could find joy
even in your tears
you could find courage
to help you face your fears
your life could be simple
happy and free
I hope my words will help you find
what you need.

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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
1 posted 1999-06-20 07:54 PM


A thoughtful poem, written well. Nicely done.
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