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Lucie
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0 posted 1999-06-20 06:23 PM


I built a snowman in the yard.
It took a while, but it wasn't hard.

I put a hat on his snow bald head.
A pipe in his mouth and called him "Ed".

He stayed all night till just after dawn.
The sun came up and poor Ed was gone.


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-07-26 11:25 PM


Great poem! How true!

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 08-30-99).]

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
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2 posted 1999-08-30 09:54 AM


Ain't that just like a man! Gone once the sun pops up !! LOL I'm glad I found this little "smile" of a poem ! Dusting it off and bringing it back !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



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