How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Hiding
 1 2
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Hiding

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
tori
Senior Member
since 06-18-99
Posts 521
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 06-20-99 01:58 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

He has gone, he's in hiding , hiding from his shame
The shame of not conceding that he has to bear some blame
Accepting of the wisdom and knowing of the truths
He has chosen hiding, just like in his youth
He visits the ocean on ships that barely float
Feels the water calling, with the words stuck in his throat,
No,no, no, and back down they go,
To a place with in he shall never know
Watch that water flowing, feeling its pull
Knowing she is out there, and there is nothing he can do
Stuck here in his hiding just like in his youth
Torn with temper rising feeling like a fool
Just wont take on the plight, it is against his rule
Admitting to his wrongs is something he can't do
A lonely man awakens only to the day
Of finding he's mistaken, and
Love has gone her way

Copywrite toi 1999
Hiding is in the process of being published :-)
© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
Member Ascendant
since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


1 posted 07-14-99 11:55 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

congrats on the publishing of this fine work its irony i love well worth gracing a volume of poetry
~one voice~
Senior Member
since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


2 posted 07-14-99 12:28 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Yes, Tori! Congratualtions of this one getting published! That's so cool! This piece is well-deserving of it!

------------------
~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

tori will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Hiding Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors