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Open Poetry #1

If I were you

Gilian
New Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 8

0 posted 1999-06-19 09:01 PM

If I were you and you were me,
I wonder how our world would be.
A little simplier, possibly.
If I were you and you were me.

See, our past was but a dying flame.
Neither you or I accepted the blame.
And if our attitudes do not change,
Then our past and future are one in the same.

Now, if you were me and I were you.
Then maybe our friendship would still be true.
Cause you would blame me, and I'd blame me too,
That's if you were me and I were you.

So finally we do agree.
Our friendship can once again be.
You accepted that you're guilty.
Since I am you and you are me.

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

1 posted 1999-06-19 09:30 PM

very deep! I like this one it is very thought provoking and explains deeply the trials of relationships on the wire. Good job!

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 1999-06-19 11:27 PM

It is an excellent compliment to my poem. Nice job!

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