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If I were you

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Gilian
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0 posted 06-19-99 09:01 PM       View Profile for Gilian   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gilian

If I were you and you were me,
I wonder how our world would be.
A little simplier, possibly.
If I were you and you were me.

See, our past was but a dying flame.
Neither you or I accepted the blame.
And if our attitudes do not change,
Then our past and future are one in the same.

Now, if you were me and I were you.
Then maybe our friendship would still be true.
Cause you would blame me, and I'd blame me too,
That's if you were me and I were you.

So finally we do agree.
Our friendship can once again be.
You accepted that you're guilty.
Since I am you and you are me.
© Copyright 1999 Gilian - All Rights Reserved
JANNA
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1 posted 06-19-99 09:30 PM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

very deep! I like this one it is very thought provoking and explains deeply the trials of relationships on the wire. Good job!
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It is an excellent compliment to my poem. Nice job!
 
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