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All I Feel

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Krystal
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0 posted 06-19-99 05:33 AM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Krystal

All I feel is hurt,
Will this pain ever end?
All I feel is betrayal,
Will this broken heart mend?

All I feel is emptiness,
Will this space ever be filled?
All I feel is anger,
Will this chaos be stilled?

You said you'd never hurt me,
That I'd been hurt too many times before;
But you left me
Alone, wanting to die, crying on the floor.

I suppose that you don't think
You hurt me;
I suppose you justify
Your cruelty;

You think you are different,
And therein lies the tragedy;
You WERE different, because you broke
The only heart inside of me.

Still, you go on,
As if I never existed in your heart;
And you don't even blink
As you shamelessly tear mine apart.

All I feel is hurt,
Will this pain ever end?
All I feel is betrayal,
Will this broken heart mend?

TO CHRIS

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")
© Copyright 1999 Krystal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-19-99 04:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I don't like this guy! (but I do like you for writing it) Nice Job
Krystal
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2 posted 06-19-99 07:55 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

Thank you, Balladeer... I appreciate the feedback!! Thanks for taking the time to read and reply to my poem.

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