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Open Poetry #1

All I Feel

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

0 posted 1999-06-19 05:33 AM

All I feel is hurt,
Will this pain ever end?
All I feel is betrayal,
Will this broken heart mend?

All I feel is emptiness,
Will this space ever be filled?
All I feel is anger,
Will this chaos be stilled?

You said you'd never hurt me,
That I'd been hurt too many times before;
But you left me
Alone, wanting to die, crying on the floor.

I suppose that you don't think
You hurt me;
I suppose you justify
Your cruelty;

You think you are different,
And therein lies the tragedy;
You WERE different, because you broke
The only heart inside of me.

Still, you go on,
As if I never existed in your heart;
And you don't even blink
As you shamelessly tear mine apart.

All I feel is hurt,
Will this pain ever end?
All I feel is betrayal,
Will this broken heart mend?

TO CHRIS

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-06-19 04:49 PM

I don't like this guy! (but I do like you for writing it) Nice Job

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

2 posted 1999-06-19 07:55 PM

Thank you, Balladeer... I appreciate the feedback!! Thanks for taking the time to read and reply to my poem.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

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