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ChristelleS
Junior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 15
San Diego, Ca. U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-06-19 02:35 AM


I try to convince myself
I couldn't possibly fall in love
with words alone.
I know there has to be so much more.
I read what you type
It brings such warm feelings.
Feelings I once felt but
Thought I had lost forever.
The feeling of true friendship,
passion, maybe love.
As time floats by,
Day after long day,
I look forward to our time together.
I wonder if you feel the same.
This is something that can't be explained.
You have to experience this feeling for yourself.
It is the addiction to ones mind,
heart and soul.

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Christelle S.

© Copyright 1999 ChristelleS - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-06-19 01:50 PM


This is exactly how I felt with my first boyfriend. Online is how we communicated, learned about each other. Very well written.

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*Krista Knutson*

Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-06-19 08:20 PM


Very nice job of writing. Be careful, though. They don't call it the Net for nothing.
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-07-21 11:06 PM


just curious...have you met him yet?

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~


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