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JANNA Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 51arlington, tx usa |
Insecurity - I feel sufficated in your arms. cradled tightly in your bosom I feed like a glutton. Assured by the sweet milk which I can not stop from flowing across my lips. Oh please, I can not stand to believe in your banter of why I should cower and continue to weep. But what if I try to wean from your teat, only to find my back won't go straight? But oh how your sustanance fills me heavily-until one day no more will I need but you. So I must give way to a whole new unknown, and drink from the glass of bitter and sweet- Happiness lies dormant inside me waiting for that glass of self esteem. |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Janna, I really liked this one! It's smooth and intelligent and sensuous without trying to be. Nice work sandman |
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JANNA Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 51arlington, tx usa |
Thank you sandman! I really appreciate your reponse, I can't wait to read some of your work! |
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