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georgie
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0 posted 06-18-99 07:41 PM       View Profile for georgie   Email georgie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for georgie

You flew through life,
in a wink of an eye,
You fought a good fight,
gave life a valiant try.
But like a rose in bloom,
in the cold deep snow,
Too fragile and beautiful,
to prosper and grow.
So sleep sweetly my little one,
the battle is now done,
You will live on in my heart,
my Timothy, my beloved son.

© Copyright 1999 georgie - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 06-18-99 08:38 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Extremely touching and moving.. Thank you.
georgie
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2 posted 06-18-99 09:27 PM       View Profile for georgie   Email georgie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for georgie


beautiful work..you must have lost a child
what a wonderful tribute to him thanks
Wintersurfer
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3 posted 06-18-99 09:35 PM       View Profile for Wintersurfer   Email Wintersurfer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wintersurfer

You have expressed your love for your son so simply and beautifully. Thank you.
Nan
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4 posted 06-18-99 09:53 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Welcome to Passions, Georgie
This poem has a great deal of personal significance to me today - Thanks for posting it... It's lovely

Sally S.
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5 posted 06-18-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

A very moving sentiment. Thank you for sharing this with us.
JANNA
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6 posted 06-18-99 10:29 PM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

beautiful poem... I am so sorry for your loss.
Tim
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7 posted 06-19-99 09:43 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

beautiful...
Poet deVine
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8 posted 06-19-99 11:40 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Poetry that makes us feel...makes us cry or laugh is the purest poetry. This poem was pure...we feel the loss as you do. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Augchic711
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9 posted 06-20-99 03:01 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

One word for you OUTSTANDING!!!! Thank you for sharing your loss with us. I am sooo sorry but I feel your pain as well as everyone who will read your poetry! Thank you for sharing it with me and what a wonderful tribute to your son Timothy!

******Augchic711*******
Tequilia_Sunrise
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10 posted 07-04-2004 11:17 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

Beautiful, very much enjoyed
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