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My Love, My Precious One

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Nan
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0 posted 06-18-99 07:56 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

'Tis true, my love, my precious one ~
....I wish I could be you.
Your trust and love for all I do,
....Your joy with each day's sun.

I envy so your faith in me,
....No questions in your heart.
Our souls enjoined right from the start,
....And for eternity.

Your innocence and smile of gold
....Embrace me as you sleep.
My wisdom, though, I'd like to keep.
....You're merely eight months old.

*digging into my archives again*
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Alicat
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since 05-23-99
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1 posted 06-18-99 12:28 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Wow...you have captured that fleeting moment in life when someone else's world revolves around you with unconditional love bequethed. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

Nan, I think I might have gotten over that slump...just check out my next post.



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Le Jongleur Aspirante


JANNA
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2 posted 06-18-99 11:38 PM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

What a beautiful poem! I have just discovered this site and have fallen in love!! You so depicted every mother's love and awe at how a child loves. This brought tears to my eyes. Our children are such gifts- thanks for portraying it so beauifully!!
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azblond
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4 posted 07-16-99 03:54 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

You have touched my soul, and made me hug my Daughter sleeping peacefully (at last)...

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...


TomMark
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very sweet!
 
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