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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
My Cassanova, Such Joy I have found with you around , my life feels so complete The changing moon's have not brought me as much delight, as your words have set my life so right Is fate to thank for our incounter? Or is there really a higher power that guides us to ones we love? Is it God to thank in heaven above? Wheather the moons and stars are setting right, or God's gift of pure delight, or fate for reason's we'll never know, I'm just glad that it is so Each day we share our lives and ponder In dreams we reach to seek and teach as eachothers hearts grow fonder There is nothing in this world we would not do, to keep our laughter burning Nothing in this world can come between two hearts that seek the yearning As passion fly's on wings of white that sails in sunsets mist, with dreamy eyes, two hearts collide, to catch a stolen kiss. Copyright tori May 3 1999 |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Great poem, you have got great rhythm in this one and the your use of imagery in the last two lines is just great. Keep it up Tori. You truly are talented. Jfreak |
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