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Open Poetry #1

I wish I knew

owen
Junior Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 19
Toledo, WA USA

0 posted 1999-06-18 02:19 AM

Yet another poem of me desperately wanting to know just what my dear Katrina is thinking.

Can she see how much I love her

Or do I speak those words in vain

Can she tell I would have no other

And does she know she’s not the same

As other girls before her

The ones that couldn’t compare

I need her as a lover

I offer her my life to share

I wish I could see into her mind

And see what her thoughts consist of

But I may be scared of what I find

Her feelings may not be true love

I write her letters and poems

So that she will know

Just how much I care

I’m not sure if I get through

When I say “I love you”

I hope she realizes this kind of love is so rare

Augchic711
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA

1 posted 1999-06-18 02:24 AM

owen-- yet again you move me with your words thank you for sharing it with me again hope to hear from you again

*******augchic711******

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

2 posted 1999-07-07 01:08 AM

I wonder if she knows how lucky she is?
Such depth of emotion expressed here,
great poem.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

3 posted 1999-07-12 12:57 PM

if every man wrote such poetry...divorce would soon be history

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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

4 posted 1999-07-12 01:01 PM

Amen sister ! You write beautifully Owen...
Keep up the good work

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