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I wish I knew

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owen
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since 06-17-99
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0 posted 06-18-99 02:19 AM       View Profile for owen   Email owen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit owen's Home Page   View IP for owen

Yet another poem of me desperately wanting to know just what my dear Katrina is thinking.

Can she see how much I love her

Or do I speak those words in vain

Can she tell I would have no other

And does she know she’s not the same

As other girls before her

The ones that couldn’t compare

I need her as a lover

I offer her my life to share

I wish I could see into her mind

And see what her thoughts consist of

But I may be scared of what I find

Her feelings may not be true love

I write her letters and poems

So that she will know

Just how much I care

I’m not sure if I get through

When I say “I love you”

I hope she realizes this kind of love is so rare
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Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
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1 posted 06-18-99 02:24 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

owen-- yet again you move me with your words thank you for sharing it with me again hope to hear from you again

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thursdayschild
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since 07-01-99
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2 posted 07-07-99 01:08 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

I wonder if she knows how lucky she is?
Such depth of emotion expressed here,
great poem.
elvira
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3 posted 07-12-99 12:57 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

if every man wrote such poetry...divorce would soon be history

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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much


mia
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4 posted 07-12-99 01:01 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

Amen sister ! You write beautifully Owen...
Keep up the good work
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