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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
No one asks for my opinion No one asks me if I care No one asks me they just stand and stare Standing there looking Standing there laughing Fingers pointed, Eyes engaged They're eyes piercing my being They're eyes looking me through No one asks me how I am No one asks me what to do No one asks me if I care They just stand there and STARE!!! |
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owen Junior Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 19Toledo, WA USA |
I like it, I like it. I'm kinda new here, but I think that you are one of my favorites. |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
Owen-- Your words mean so much I signed on last nite and this is sooo inspiring i'm 16 and just had my first 3 poems published in a school lit mag. and i just thought that was a stupid task but your words have sent this chill of emotion down my spine and I appreciate you reading my work I can't wait to hear from you again your work especially! *******augchic711******* |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
Keep writing Aug....i started when i was 16...that was 25yrs ago....and i am still going strong.....save everything u write....someday u will enjoy looking back and seeing how much you have grown. Good luck! |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
Genea~ Thank you for your words they mean so much reading them from you! I've read many of your works but can't always reply but they are always the same reply they are all WONDERFUL! Thank you for reading my work  ------------------ *******Augchic711******* |
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