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Eyes On Me

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Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
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O'Fallon, IL, USA


0 posted 06-18-99 01:50 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

No one asks for my opinion
No one asks me if I care
No one asks me
they just stand and stare

Standing there looking
Standing there laughing
Fingers pointed,
Eyes engaged
They're eyes piercing my being
They're eyes looking me through

No one asks me how I am
No one asks me what to do
No one asks me if I care

They just stand there and
STARE!!!
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owen
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Toledo, WA USA


1 posted 06-18-99 01:53 AM       View Profile for owen   Email owen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit owen's Home Page   View IP for owen

I like it, I like it. I'm kinda new here, but I think that you are one of my favorites.
Augchic711
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2 posted 06-18-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Owen--
Your words mean so much I signed on last nite and this is sooo inspiring i'm 16 and just had my first 3 poems published in a school lit mag. and i just thought that was a stupid task but your words have sent this chill of emotion down my spine and I appreciate you reading my work I can't wait to hear from you again your work especially!

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Genea
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3 posted 07-26-99 12:17 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

Keep writing Aug....i started when i was 16...that was 25yrs ago....and i am still going strong.....save everything u write....someday u will enjoy looking back and seeing how much you have grown.

Good luck!
Augchic711
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4 posted 07-27-99 01:14 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Genea~
Thank you for your words they mean so much reading them from you! I've read many of your works but can't always reply but they are always the same reply they are all WONDERFUL! Thank you for reading my work



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