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Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
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O'Fallon, IL, USA

0 posted 1999-06-18 01:48 AM


Roses stand for all the things you get out of love:

R is for the blissful
Romance
O is for the
Ongoing Chance
S is for the
Safety felt when your love is near
E is for the
Emptiness when that person goes away
S is for the
Sorrow when Love passes you by!

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jfreak
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Yuma, AZ, USA
1 posted 1999-06-18 06:08 AM


nice introspective(if that is the correct word I am looking for) on Romance. Pretty cool and correct, especially the Sorrow part.


Jfreak

jfreak
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2 posted 1999-06-18 06:11 AM


nice introspective(if that is the correct word I am looking for) on Roses. Pretty cool and correct, especially the Sorrow part.
I know that emptiness feeling, I just had to leave someone I just met, but formed a wonderful bond while we were together. This military thing sucks so bad at times. Hopefully God will give her back to me in due time. If not, all will be okay. Maybe some one just as awesome will walk into my life one day.

Jfreak

Augchic711
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3 posted 1999-06-25 01:57 AM


Thank you Jfreak for reading this and sharing your words with me. I hope you did enjoy this as much i have enjoyed some of your work!Thank you again!

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