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All out of Faith
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All out of Faith |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
So, all out of faith, with nowhere to run... searching for something you no longer touch.. Still, how to let go, how to survive... how to accept when something's not right... When, dreams that have vanished, leaving no trace... just out of reach, far from your faith... You, learn how to hold on, never let go... even when dreams have nothing to hold... Which, leads you to survive, to reach out and try... to look up and smile, when you used to cry... Then, you reach deep inside, pull out what's left, just to find all along, that strength is your faith... [This message has been edited by ac (edited 06-17-99).] [This message has been edited by ac (edited 06-18-99).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Profound and extremely well written. We could all learn from this poem......... |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Thank you Balladeer. I wrote it at a time when I needed the light of hope to go on. I'm extremely flattered that you liked it. |
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shadow New Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 1Bronx, NY 10459 |
There have been times when I've felt this way, thanks for the inspiration. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Thanks Shadow...may you always have the light that guides you to faith... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I have just recently discovered that having faith makes one feel much more secure, and less worried. Your poem described faith with a wonderful message. Thanks for sharing your talent. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Doesn't it feel that way though...that rushing feeling of relief when you give up your worries to the faith that it will all work out... |
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