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jfreak
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since 1999-06-17
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Yuma, AZ, USA

0 posted 1999-06-17 12:13 PM


I have found a pearl
In the most unlikely place
In souther swamp
Buried in a peculiar vase
She is pure and unblemished
As beautiful as can be
I gaze at her in amazement
Who is she?
I wonder how she was formed
So delicate and stunning
So smooth to the touch
In excitement my heart begins drumming
Thinking about the possibilities
The list is unending.
Yet the time to remove her
Is still pending
So I hide her away again
hoping no one else will find her
Leaving a little piece of my heart
Praying that it would be enough of a claimer.

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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 1999-06-17 11:38 PM


We're all really happy to hear from you, jfreak... Keep checking in occasionally so we know you're all right - and come home soon...

Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
2 posted 1999-06-18 01:38 AM


Jfreak-
This poem is soooo good you make us feel emotion for you and your pieces of heart left with that pearl i hope to hear more from you k good luck in all you try to do!

*******augchic711*******

jfreak
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA
3 posted 1999-06-18 05:55 AM


thanx Nan and Augchic711,

I leave sunday for six months. I am not sure If I am going to have internet access where I am going. That is still up in the air. Hopefully I will and then i can keep posting and reading your guys posts. Have a great one and I will try to come up with something else before I leave. God bless,

Jfreak

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Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 1999-08-19 10:22 AM


jfreak, This is beautiful.
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