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adrift
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since 1999-06-17
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0 posted 1999-06-17 06:17 AM



Today I wonder what the meaning of life is and how to fulfill it.

I sometimes think if there is something more I am missing,

Or am I just a normal 20 yr. old having a good time?

I am torn between my Lord and my actions.

Am I sending myself to eternal damnation or experencing life?

Do others my age have these same thoughts?

It seems to me that most don't.

Does this make me a bad person for seeing the path and not taking it?

Or does this make me a good person for wanting to experience life and live it to the fullest?

This is the wall I face and I wonder if I can overcome it...........

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Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
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O'Fallon, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-06-17 11:16 AM


I think your poem was wonderful and you shouldn't feel like your doing anything wrong the wall you need to overcome will soon be broken down and if you ever start to think that you are different your not it is just that most people may dismiss their feelings as normal but your conscious is providing quite the obstacle for you. Good luck and i hope you break that wall down!

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