She holds the key to his heart I hold his hand as we say goodbye She has his heart, I have his hand. Regardless his feelings I know she will still get him It sounds like he's a package And this, my dear, is true He's a package indeed, a package filled with warmth, I wish I could hold the key As I held his hand, but Gently we pass eachother and then Say Goodbye
I must say that I utterly enjoyed this so much. Your use of imagery was outstanding. We are always so much harder on ourselves than anyone else is. I have only read this one poem by you. I can tell you are a very talented writer. You keep on keeping on. I can't wait to see what else you have got in you. You are an outstanding poet.
Tallahassee, Florida, US
Thank you jfreak and fred! Your words serve as inspiration for me to continue writing I hope that you enjoy my writings and I hope that you both continue writing i have read a poem by both of you but haven't gotten to reply yet i can't wait good luck in the future and i hope to hear your words again! Thanks again from the bottom of my heart!
arlington, tx usa
I like your work!! you write so well and so from the heart. I used to write poetry constantly when I was your age and then life got ahead of me and I stopped. Now 8 years later, college, a husband, and two babies I am finally jumping back into what I live to do most! Keep it up, it sure is hard to get back into the mode once you've stopped. Janna
O'Fallon, IL, USA
How many times have I been in this situation? Passed over by the only one you could ever want? And yet, magically, I found mine for the first time. You are talent to be reckoned with. I hope we can talk sometime and compare heartache and maybe, healing.
------------------ That which does not kill us..makes us stronger.
O'Fallon, IL, USA
Pookie~ If you ever do feel like talking feel free to im me or e-mail me i'm on aol with the same name. Thank you for your kind words. And good luck in your writing and I hope that I can read your poetry soon.
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