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Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


0 posted 06-17-99 01:47 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

She holds the key to his heart
I hold his hand as we say goodbye
She has his heart,
I have his hand.
Regardless his feelings
I know she will still get him
It sounds like he's a package
And this, my dear, is true
He's a package indeed, a package
filled with warmth, I wish I could
hold the key
As I held his hand, but
Gently we pass eachother
and then
Say Goodbye
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Balladeer
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since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


1 posted 06-17-99 04:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Someone using your name commented to me that they wished they could write better. I couldn't have been you. Not if you can write like this........
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


2 posted 06-17-99 05:43 PM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

thank you so much balladeer u are certainly as kind as u are talented! I appreciate the compliment! You just have made my entire week!
jfreak
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since 06-17-99
Posts 311
Yuma, AZ, USA


3 posted 06-17-99 06:47 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Augchic711,

I must say that I utterly enjoyed this so much. Your use of imagery was outstanding. We are always so much harder on ourselves than anyone else is. I have only read this one poem by you. I can tell you are a very talented writer. You keep on keeping on. I can't wait to see what else you have got in you. You are an outstanding poet.

Jfreak
Fred Hobbs
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since 06-08-99
Posts 353
Tallahassee, Florida, US


4 posted 06-17-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

Great poem! This is the first of your's that I've read. I'll be looking for more..
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


5 posted 06-18-99 01:35 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Thank you jfreak and fred! Your words serve as inspiration for me to continue writing I hope that you enjoy my writings and I hope that you both continue writing i have read a poem by both of you but haven't gotten to reply yet i can't wait good luck in the future and i hope to hear your words again!
Thanks again from the bottom of my heart!

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JANNA
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since 06-18-99
Posts 53
arlington, tx usa


6 posted 06-18-99 11:52 PM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

I like your work!! you write so well and so from the heart. I used to write poetry constantly when I was your age and then life got ahead of me and I stopped. Now 8 years later, college, a husband, and two babies I am finally jumping back into what I live to do most! Keep it up, it sure is hard to get back into the mode once you've stopped.
Janna
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


7 posted 06-25-99 02:01 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Well janna i'm glad you got back into the habit of writing we look forward to reading you work! Thank you for your kind comments and sorry it took so long to reply i got busy working

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pookie
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since 06-25-99
Posts 6
Arnold MO USA


8 posted 06-25-99 04:00 AM       View Profile for pookie   Email pookie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pookie

How many times have I been in this situation?
Passed over by the only one you could ever want?
And yet, magically, I found mine for the first time.
You are talent to be reckoned with. I hope we can talk sometime and compare heartache and maybe, healing.


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That which does not kill us..makes us stronger.
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


9 posted 06-25-99 02:46 PM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Pookie~
If you ever do feel like talking feel free to im me or e-mail me i'm on aol with the same name. Thank you for your kind words. And good luck in your writing and I hope that I can read your poetry soon.

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wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


10 posted 06-28-99 12:55 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

love it its very um (runs goes gets dictionary) poinant
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


11 posted 06-28-99 01:51 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Thank you walt and I loved ur poems as well hope to hear from you again!

******Augchic711*******
DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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12 posted 06-28-99 05:55 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Being new to the forums, this is the first piece of yours I read. I think I'll rummage a bit further into the archives for more.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

Augchic711
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Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


13 posted 07-03-99 01:57 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Thank you dream evil i hope to read your poems too and good luck in your writing!!! WELCOME TO THE CLUB!!!


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