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Confused Emotion

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owen
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since 06-17-99
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Toledo, WA USA


0 posted 06-17-99 01:45 AM       View Profile for owen   Email owen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit owen's Home Page   View IP for owen

What are all these vision that I have in my head

I sit and I listen to myself for the longest time

And still can't make out what I'm thinking

I sense loss of hope in my self

Loss of love

Dyeing emotion

Ambition is what I thrive on when all else fails

Desire drains me weak

Lonely nights

Desperate desires

All I can hope I want is something simple

All I can seem to find is complex

Riddles and enigmas

Obfuscation of all that seemed real

Reality is transparent and dumb

Life is so mundane for some

It makes me laugh when I'm forced to see this

Conform to the beliefs of a man who claims to know better

Death is so close for him

Fear is a constant realization of the truth

If for once I could find a simple happy existence

If for a day I could crawl into the arms of something warm

Let this be the start

Let this be the end
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Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
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O'Fallon, IL, USA


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your poem has such feeling to it owen i think you are a wonderful poet who puts immense feeling in their work and i thank you for sharing it with me! good luck in the future!
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