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Confused Emotion |
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owen Junior Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 19Toledo, WA USA |
What are all these vision that I have in my head I sit and I listen to myself for the longest time And still can't make out what I'm thinking I sense loss of hope in my self Loss of love Dyeing emotion Ambition is what I thrive on when all else fails Desire drains me weak Lonely nights Desperate desires All I can hope I want is something simple All I can seem to find is complex Riddles and enigmas Obfuscation of all that seemed real Reality is transparent and dumb Life is so mundane for some It makes me laugh when I'm forced to see this Conform to the beliefs of a man who claims to know better Death is so close for him Fear is a constant realization of the truth If for once I could find a simple happy existence If for a day I could crawl into the arms of something warm Let this be the start Let this be the end |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
your poem has such feeling to it owen i think you are a wonderful poet who puts immense feeling in their work and i thank you for sharing it with me! good luck in the future! |
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