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owen
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0 posted 06-17-99 01:42 AM       View Profile for owen   Email owen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit owen's Home Page   View IP for owen

Your body is such a splendor

I've felt every inch and explored you with great care

What else can you offer me

Besides that ass, that breast, and that sex

No part of you is left sacred and that disgusts me

It was me that destroyed your pathetic righteousness

Stained your sheets and betrayed your covet

Canít you say anything that might interest me

That might make me respect what Iíve taken away

Have I told you that your beautiful

Have I told thatís all you are

Give me a kiss

Let me taste that sour soul once more
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Genea
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1 posted 07-31-99 10:06 AM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

Speaker in this one sounds guilt-ridden to me.
WhtDove
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anything that might intrest me?
Sounds like maybe someone else was invaded, and waiting for a reply that might intrest them. Look to others not just self!
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Pathetic righteousness? Not sure I like that phrase. Sour soul? Hm...

This may be better received on the Adult Forum.
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